Golly gosh I am freezing!! The water feels like ice out of a freezer, the water splashes out of the pool like cups getting banged against each other, The clear blue water sinks your eyes to the bottom of the pool like the water is taking you on a Journey! I look at the concrete as I do the monkey swing around the pool I finally get to the end of our 12 metre long pool, "I have had enough I'm getting out" I chuckled to my sister. (Sorry I can not get a picture of my pool but I will try to get one similar) 
Well done Lani. You have used some great language in this piece of writing. Remember to add you name as a label. This will help others to view your posts.
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Mrs G
Wow Lani you are very brave to be swimming in your pool. How long did you stay in for? I bet it was freezing! I like the way you described the pool. You look like you are having fun baking, swimming and blogging for your holidays.
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