On Saturday the 24th of September, My family and I went on an amazing trip to Taupo Bay. It was AWESOME!!!! We stayed with our good friends in their sleep out. It couldn't of been better. We also went to an also good friends party. We had a swim, and it was kind of warm. Here is the Taupo Bay
That sounds great. You must of had lots of fun on the beach. I never knew the water at Taupo bay is warm. Maybe I should go.
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Hi Jessica
ReplyDeleteNever forget that because you are a New Zealander, you actually live in paradise!!! Looks like you practically had the whole beach to yourself!!! By the way, after 'couldn't' you should have 'have', not 'of', because your sentence is saying: It could not have been better. Have a great time!
HI Jess It's me Lani, Taupo Bay looks so sunny was it Fun? But have you read through your story to see if their are any mistakes?
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